Radio Drama Analysis
Mood Board:
Four Ideas of radio dramas
Four Ideas for Sci-Fi Drama:
1.
‘The Green Lanterns’, a show about the ups and
downs of DC’s “The Green lanterns” Corporation before Hal Jordan (The Green
Lantern) is introduced.
2.
‘Back’, a show about a highly trained man, in
the form of combat and stealth, from a time in the future who is tasked with
going back in time to not fix but slightly alter time lines for the sake of the
future.
3.
‘Nightcrawler’, a show about the Marvel
character ‘Nightcrawler’ who is known for being a part of the X-Men, the show
takes place before he joins them and the endeavours that he is situated with.
4.
‘Flog Gnaw’, a show about a group of musical
talents that eventually find out they have abilities that nobody else knows
about, they use these powers to get their own way and manipulate people,
eventually the group has differences and problems need to be resolved.
Discussion of story, characters and setting with the group
P2)
Tower 13 First draft
P3)
Pitch 1 (Tower 13)
Pitch 2 (The Green Lanterns)
P4)
Group Pitch treatment
Pitch Feedback:
- Well done and clearly passionate about the idea, but because of the passion it was drawn out a bit far. It could have been narrowed down a bit to make it easier to understand because I was feeding over too much information.
Story Feedback:
- Make it clear as to why the son is damaged by the shooting, maybe say that the bullet was coated with a chemical that effected his body and his mental ability.
- Specify when the times are set.
Group Pitch Feedback:
Story wise, it needs to be clearer on how Gustov is affected by the bullet and why it affected him as it did. Explain why the main characters wants what he wants and why he cant have it. Explain why the characters aren't all from Northern/Eastern Europe, we can fix this by centralising an area for the towers, not just the tower being in Estonia so that there is a range of culture in each tower. The time periods in the radio drama could be clearer so that the audience can have a true authenticity of the time period.
P5)
Draft 2 for Pitch
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